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Post by thorn on Nov 29, 2005 8:53:15 GMT -5
It was originally going to be called Halloween: The homecoming but then I changed it. Laurie isn't gonna be in it after all. In stead I bring Jimmy Lloyd back from Halloween II and I creat new characters. Well it's almost december and it may not come out in till 2006.
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Post by michaelmyers on Nov 29, 2005 23:40:29 GMT -5
Sounds really interesting. I look forward to reading it. Anything Halloween is my kind of story
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Post by thorn on Dec 22, 2005 14:53:16 GMT -5
I am rewtiting it and I hope this time you like my new script. It's about Sam's son. and his family. And Michael Myers.
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Post by michaelmyers on Dec 23, 2005 15:26:46 GMT -5
I am rewtiting it and I hope this time you like my new script. It's about Sam's son. and his family. And Michael Myers. It's not that i didn't really like it it's just i wasn't sure about some of the new characters you introduced. Maybe once the story is done it will all fit together. I shouldn't have judged so soon. Sorry.
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Post by thorn on Feb 10, 2006 11:54:32 GMT -5
Halloween: The terror of Michael Myers
Written by Thorn Based on characters created by John Carpenter and Debra Hill
The opening credits start at the myers house and the camera faces a pumpkin and the credits start and at the end of the opening credits a knife comes out of the pumpkin and the opening credits end. Then the camera faces Dr. Sam Loomis's grave stone his son Dr. Ben Loomis looks at his grave stone he sets flowers on it he cries Michael is behind him breathing hard Ben gets up and walks off in his car Michael follows him Ben drives off Michael looks at him. Michael walks off. Ben is in his house with his wife Haylee Loomis and his kids Brandon Loomis, Justin Loomis, and Dan Loomis. Dan is playing "Call of duty 2" for the X box 360 Brandon is playing with there dog Remy Justin is playing "Need for speed: Underground 2" for the x box.
Haylee
"Hello Ben how was your day?"
Ben
"I went to my fathers grave."
Haylee
"Ben Michael Myers didn't kill your father."
Ben
"He did I saw Myers kill my father in 1995 with my own two eyes."
Haylee
"Ben your so obsessed with Myers that you actually think Myers done all these things."
Ben
"Haylee he did kill them."
Haylee
"Ben lets just forget about all this."
Ben
"Good idea."
Haylee
"Lets send the kids to bed."
Ben
"Sure."
After they do they turn on the TV down stairs and they watch "Father of the bride" Meantime Justin is asleep Michael's shadow appears Michael sees Justin Michael grabs out his knife Justin wakes up screams and runs down stairs.
Justin
"Mom Dad! The boogie man's in my room he tried to kill me!"
Haylee
"Justin the boogie man is dead."
Justin
"No he's not!"
Ben
"I'll go check in his room."
Haylee
"Go ahead."
Ben walks up stairs opens the door and he sees nothing.
Ben
"No boogie man."
Haylee
"Justin get some rest."
Justin
"I saw him!"
Ben
"The boogie man died a long time ago."
Justin runs to his room and goes to bed.
Haylee
"He's asleep."
Ben
"And?"
Haylee is taking her top off Ben hears Michael's hard breathing he turns around.
Ben
"I think someones in our house!"
Haylee
"Are you sure?"
Ben
"Owe I'm sure."
Ben gets out a baseball bat and he looks around the house.
Ben
"Michael do you want me?"
Michael is behind him Ben turns around Michael isn't there Ben turns around.
Ben
"Michael you killed my father and you won't get me."
Haylee
"Ben?"
Michael is behind her Haylee turns the tv on and she watches "Dawn of the dead." Michael tilts his head and walks off Ben sees him.
Ben
"Haylee Michael's behind you!"
Haylee screams Ben gets out a gun and shoots Michael. Michael stands there then he disapears.
Haylee
"Was it really Myers?"
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Post by death on Feb 10, 2006 13:49:25 GMT -5
So far I like it Thorn
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