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Post by thorn on Nov 4, 2005 20:47:43 GMT -5
I am now writting a script called The Deer. And I will post about the plot later when I get most of it done.
If you ever have any ideas for The Deer please tell me.
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Post by Punk19 on Nov 4, 2005 20:59:06 GMT -5
Is it a horror/comedy/mystery/action/thriller/romance?
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Post by thorn on Feb 6, 2006 18:34:12 GMT -5
The Deer
Tag line: Owe DEER god!
Original names The Deer movie The Deer motion pitcher Night of the living deer Killer Deer Evil mutant deer
Rated PG-13 Original rating R.
Voice
"They say hunting is a fun sport and kids say it's the most fun killing deer Well now ordinary teenagers will see what hunting has became. So here's the true story about teenagers who went hunting one day. Some had lived to tell the tale but some haven't, If you like deer you probably won't like this true story about these evil deer. If you continue watching you will never go hunting ever again!"
The opening credits start at a deer's skull and fire is in the background and a deer roars then the theme plays and the credits start then they end then the theme stops.
Billings, Mt January 12TH 2006 Thursday 6 o'clock
Brandon
"Hey everyone I got an idea!"
Haylee
"If you have an idea then why don't you tell us what it is!"
Brandon
"I will tell you you idiot!"
Eric
"So whats your idea?"
Brandon
" How about this, We go hunting and camping at the same time!"
Haylee
"Brandon you know I hate hunting!"
Brandon
"Come on Haylee! This is your chance to do something different!"
Haylee
"I don't know?"
Brandon
"Come on friggan idiot!"
Eric
"I want to go the most!"
Haylee
"And I know why. You only said that because you have a crush on me."
Eric
"I don't know what your talking about."
Haylee
"Please don't play dumb with me."
Brandon
"Well are you coming?"
Haylee
"I will if you keep Eric away from me so he won't sleep with me."
Brandon
"Alright then this weekend what day?"
Eric
"Friday works best for me."
Mike
"Me also, Friday."
Brandon
"It works for me!"
Justin
"Friday."
Thomas
"Tuesday, kidding Friday."
Leon
"Friday."
Brandon
"Friday it is! After school 3 o'clock!"
Eric
"Sure."
Justin
"It works for me."
Mike
"3."
Leon
"3 take it or leave it!"
Thomas
"Same here 3 o'clock.'
Haylee
"Sure 3 o'clock."
Brandon
"3 it is!"
Eric
"See you all on Friday!"
They all walk off and get in there cars and drive off. Leon is at his house he turns on the TV and " Freddy VS.Jason" is on TV a deer with a knife stabs him and Leon screams and Leon dies. Mean time at Eric's house he is watching "Herbie: Fully loaded"
Eric
"This movie sucks."
He switches the channel and watches "The ring 2"
Eric
"Friggan gay."
He switches the channel to " The Fog"
Eric
"Awesome!"
He watches it a deer watches him from a window and Eric turns around and he sees a deer the deer looks at him and Eric opens the door and the deer is still there looking at him and the deer runs away.
Eric
"What kind of deer was that?"
Eric walks back inside of his house his parents are home.
Eric's mom
"Hi Eric how was your day?"
Eric
"Good."
Eric's dad
"My day was good also. Hey Eric I saw this weird deer outside did you."
Eric
"I saw one also."
Eric's dad
"Anything interesting happen today Eric?"
Eric
"Not really."
Eric's brother
"Waz up player!"
Eric
"Waz up bro!."
A deer is inside of Eric's house and is at the power switch, sees it, growls at it, rises it and destroys the main switch and the power in the hole house turns off.
Eric's mom
"What da devil?"
Eric's dad
"The power?"
Eric
"It's fine outside."
A deer comes up behind Eric's mom, grabs her, roars, and Eric's mom screams and the deer eats her.
Eric
"Mom I herd you scream are you ok!?"
Eric's dad
"Honey?"
A deer has a axe and is in front of Eric's dad and slices him and kills him.
Eric
"Mom dad?"
Meantime at Haylee's house.
Haylee
"Is there anything good on tv?"
She turns on her tv and looks thew the channels she turns to "Mean girls".
Haylee
"Good movie."
A deer arises.
Meantime at Brandon's house Brandon is playing "Call of Duty 2" on x box live for the x box 360.
Brandon
"Take this!"
A deer arises behind him Brandon goes to the restroom and the deer roars.
Meantime at Justin's house Justin is watching "South Park" A deer is looking at Justin and drolls on him Justin turns around the deer has a chainsaw, Justin screams and the deer slices him and blood is on the couch.
Friday the 13TH Bad luck day 3 o'clock after school
Eric is waiting for Brandon Eric sees a deer Brandon comes.
Brandon
"Eric."
Eric
"Yes."
Brandon
"Hop in."
He gets in the car Haylee, Mike, Thomas, & Leon get in the car and they drive off. Many hours later they are there at Camp Crystal Lake.
Brandon
"Wait a minute I think I herd this name before."
Eric
"Yeah I think I did also."
Brandon
"Owe well."
They all get out of the car and they get there packages and they all walk to find a place to hunt and camp. A few minutes later they are at a location and they set up tents.
Brandon
"Alright what should we do first? Hunting or camping?"
Eric
"I think hunting first."
Haylee
"I agree. Hunting."
Thomas
"Hunting."
Leon
"Hey didn't we forget Justin?"
Brandon
"Owe well."
Leon
"Hunting so lets get are guns out!"
Eric
"Lets go hunting."
They get out there guns and they run off.
Eric
"Alright lets all split up!"
Haylee
"Yeah good idea!"
They split up and a deer is stalking Haylee. Haylee sees a cave she runs to it and she walks inside of it.
Haylee
"Hey it's a deer. Aren't you the cutest thing."
The deer grabs her roars Haylee screams.
Haylee
"HELP!!!"
Eric
"Hold up I think that was Haylee!"
Thomas
"Lets go look for her!"
They run to the cave.
Thomas
"Hey is that a deer?"
Eric
"Wait is it stepping on Haylee?"
Thomas
"Lets go check."
They look inside then they get out.
Thomas
"Huh I guess it wasn't a deer."
Eric
"Lets get out of here."
They walk off a deer comes behind Thomas. Thomas screams and the deer eats Thomas Eric screams and runs off Eric steps on Haylee's body and he screams and a deer runs to him and Eric runs off. Eric runs to his tent hides in side. Leon screams Eric hides.
9 o'clock pm
Eric is hiding still a deer walks around the tent Eric cover his mouth the deer tears a little part of the tent looks at Eric.
Brandon
"Eric! Where in gods name are you!"
The deer growls then roars and runs off.
Brandon
"It's me Eric."
Eric
"Alright Brandon."
Eric lets Brandon in Brandon is in Eric shuts the tent door.
Eric
"Where are the others?"
Brandon
"Leon's dead. But, I don't think Thomas is dead."
Eric
"We should go help him.'
Brandon
"It's two late Eric Thomas must be dead."
Eric
"Friends are suppose to help one another not be a fool."
Brandon
"........."
Eric
"I'm going out there."
Brandon
"Alright Eric go ahead don't blame me if you die."
Eric
"See yeah later."
Eric gets out of the tent and he closes the tent door and looks for Thomas.
Eric
"Thomas?!"
A deer is stalking him and growls. Thomas runs to Eric.
Thomas
"Eric run!"
Eric
"Hey Thomas!"
A pack of deer are chaseing Thomas. Eric and Thomas run to the tent and they gtet inside and they shut the door and a pack of deer run threw the tent and the deer run off.
Eric
"Told yeah Thomas was ok Brandon."
Brandon
"I thought he was."
Thomas
"In least Eric came to save my butt and all what you could do is just be a lazy bump."
A deer is behind them.
Thomas
"Guys I think a deer is behind us."
Thomas, Eric, and Brandon turn around.
Eric
"Hey Thomas your right."
Eric, Thomas, and Brandon run to a tree and they climb the tree
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Post by death on Feb 6, 2006 21:03:49 GMT -5
Cool
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Post by tanyacatherine on Sept 25, 2008 23:41:18 GMT -5
One of several 1978 films dealing with the Vietnam War (including Hal Ashby's Oscar-winning Coming Home), Michael Cimino's epic second feature The Deer Hunter was both renowned for its tough portrayal of the war's effect on American working class steel workers and notorious for its ahistorical use of Russian roulette in the Vietnam sequences. Structured in five sections contrasting home and war, the film opens in Clairton, PA, as Mike (Robert De Niro), Nick (Christopher Walken), and Stan (John Cazale, in his last film) celebrate the wedding of their friend Steve (John Savage) and go on a final deer hunt before the men leave for Vietnam. Mike treats hunting as a test of skill, lecturing Stan about the value of "one shot" deer slaying and brushing off Nick's urgings to appreciate nature's beauty. -------------- Tanyaa Internet Marketing
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